2 The Mailbox
Didn't realize when your affectionate fingers slipped into
mine,
Silently you calmed those thunderous scars,
You put them behind the bars,
As I swirl in your aura, I see an absolute me,
Ringing the bell of that glee, I be
Figuring out was someone else’s game, until the conscious
…..I could be the blame,
Tiny thing called love, it may flourish, nourish, dies off then
for years you frame.
Emotions alone can’t walk the longest mile, that curve will
attract only for a while….
Where is the math, bubbled in the vapor bath? ------ I stop
That funny silhouette of yours, I saw your depth when we were
under the glittering stars,
You weren’t just talking, you saw and you made yourself the
strongest person
Your eyes saw beauty in everything mine, was it the original
‘you’ design?
One constant companion, I can’t help feeling the sadness ‘in’!!
Like a lucky energy covering me you never complain,
With you or without you, ‘you’ will always remain ……
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