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Didn't realize when your affectionate fingers slipped into mine,

Silently you calmed those thunderous scars,

You put them behind the bars,

As I swirl in your aura, I see an absolute me,

Ringing the bell of that glee, I be

Figuring out was someone else’s game, until the conscious …..I could be the blame,

Tiny thing called love, it may flourish, nourish, dies off then for years you frame.

Emotions alone can’t walk the longest mile, that curve will attract only for a while….

Where is the math, bubbled in the vapor bath? ------ I stop

That funny silhouette of yours, I saw your depth when we were under the glittering stars,

You weren’t just talking, you saw and you made yourself the strongest person

Your eyes saw beauty in everything mine, was it the original ‘you’ design?

One constant companion, I can’t help feeling the sadness ‘in’!!

Like a lucky energy covering me you never complain,  

With you or without you, ‘you’ will always remain ……

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  1. very well written!!! loved ur words n imaginations :) u r on ur way to become a poetess :)

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    1. Thank you Sumeet, am inspired by real things happening around with real people, am so glad you liked this piece, was sure you would cause you love words and in this one they mean a lot to me. :) :)

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    2. yes chitra, they mean a lot to me! hope to see more :)

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  2. writer since birth, slowly awakening..?? lovingly madness

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    1. Yes Doctor, well I was in search and in doubt for quite long, finally found it I guess, hoping to produce the best in future too. There is no piece of art without a touch of madness, thank you so much for liking it. :)

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    1. Am so glad people like you are finding it good :-) .... will be sharing it with friends ! Thank you once again.

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  5. purity in imagination makes this quiet wonderful! liked it!
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  6. Awesome shweetie... just loved it.. superb !! :)

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    1. Thanks sweetheart, as you said, I will be coming up with more soon :) luv ya ! :)

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